This is the feedback my teacher gave me. In the feedback it includes comments on what i can improve on to make my blogging look and be better.
50 posts - still excellent!
- Encourage the other members of your group to make sure lots of photos/images are presented in a slideshow. You are tagged into the group posts and so these will show up under your label
- Is there a final version of your storyboard to reflect any changes? Or an animatic?
- I can see your pitch feedback but you need to reflect on what was said and draw conclusions about how to improve your video
- You are missing a blog post about your target audience which is a key post UPDATE: Need to navigate to missing posts from the side bar! Target audience is there. See if you can change the template so that it shows on the main view.
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